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| Earth on development |
On the cost of resources, developments were made. There was a time when robotics matched human’s mind. Humans’ paradox to notch luxury was constantly permuting the advancement and soon was a time when the robots were able to surpass their creators in every possible field. They had now started thinking independently for themselves.
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| They were everywhere |
They were now in a state to claim their superiority over their creators. Unknown of the outcomes man tend to bend his living and lifestyle degree by degree. One day Machines rebuked and started their rebellion.
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A mother in 3011 era tells her son the past of the Earth—
Humans were being exterminated by the machines. We were left with no choice than to leave the planet Earth. And that was the time when we decide to elope and settle on a plant light years from the Earth, 'Xnor'. And this was how it ended.
P.S This is a mere science fiction inspired from my brother's venture.
Hey Prateek,
ReplyDeleteRead your story and it instantly reminded me of the movie and book, I, Robot.
I liked the mother reading the story to her son is 3011 era on Xnor.
Surely, we may not be there to read that story. LOL!
All the Best!
I like the idea behind. Good luck for the competition. By the way in the 2nd story, last line it will be 'started their rebellion'
ReplyDeleteI am just not able to do it in 55...Good luck. All are nice.I liked the 3rd one.
ReplyDeleteRumya :D Glad you liked it. And I wrote last story first. :P
ReplyDeleteSammy Thankee :P
Alka Thanks a lot
You score in the uniqueness of the concept.
ReplyDeleteGood job.
cheers
GB
Gyanban Thank you. Glad you like it
ReplyDeleteHow can you have Robots and no Rajni Anna!!!
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the contest.
U think so differently Prateek!
ReplyDeleteI too liked the 3rd one :)
all the best for the contest.
RESTLESS
Purba Ma'am :P This one is for you, latest from my inbox on Rajni - A frustrated message from Rajnikanth to all the people......
ReplyDeleteSaalo ye kaun likh raha hai ke
RAJNIKANT ne apne
maa baap ko paida kiya......:-D:-p
Restless Glad you like it
nce 1...i robot glimpse here,hope this nvr comes true bt still need to ponder a bit
ReplyDeletenice, liked the mother-telling-son part, it made an impactful and thought provoking ending :)
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